Fan fiction is perhaps the single strangest method of creative expression ever conceived. Despite the fact that the form is fueled entirely by people incapable of coming up with their own characters, there are works that show a remarkable—and often disturbing—level of creativity. Writers, unchained from the burdens of conventional standards of plot, pacing and grammar, are free to put their favorite characters in any situation they can dream of; and what they dream of is often insane. Here are ten fan fiction stories that we found especially baffling; although because TopTenz strives to be safe for work we eliminated any explicitly erotic stories—and therefore 99.97% of the genre—from consideration.
10. Sailor/ G.I. Joe
G.I. Joe represents America’s finest artistic achievement, and Sailor Moon represents how crazy Japan is. But what happens when the two forces team up to fight their enemies? Cultures collide, magical girls join the military, and stuff gets blown up. A lot of stuff. That’s pretty much all this story is about, actually; it’s like a novelization of the G.I. Joe movie, except with a lot more teenage girls talking about teenage girl things. While they kill people.
It’s a weird combination, because G.I. Joe is manlier than punching a grizzly bear to death while Sailor Moon’s target demographic consists entirely of 12 year old girls; so the writer of this story is either a very confused young man or the most awesome 12 year old girl ever. Also, we’d like to note that they dedicated their tale to the victims of 9/11, which, as we all know, was Cobra Commander’s most heinous act to date.
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“Before the Vipers could raise a weapon, the Senshi attacked. ‘Jupiter Oak Evolution!’ Jupiter roared and hurtled a bolt of lightning at the HEAT and SAW Vipers. Both of them screamed as they were engulfed, electricity coursing through them, and both collapsed to the ground with a groan, twitching.”
9. Avatar and Twilight Combine in an Orgy of Clichés
You know those vampire books that all the kids these days are talking about? This may shock you, but they’re popular fodder for fan fiction. Hundreds of thousands of stories popular, to be precise. Out of all that craziness, this crossover with Avatar represents the strangest story we could find before our minds rebelled and refused to process any more tales about sparkling vampires and homoerotic werewolves.
The Twilight gang has come to Pandora to become involved in the Avatar project, presumably because budget cuts have made vapid teenage girls and mopey bloodsuckers the only affordable candidates for becoming nine foot tall Smurfs. Once transformed, they explore the wonders of nature and… oh, wait, they mostly just whine to each other about their love lives. There is a climactic battle, but it’s little more than a brief interruption of all the lovey-dovey talk. So if you liked Avatar but wished all the action had been replaced with sexual tension, then this is the story for you! You creep.
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“I’d heard a new guy had arrived today for the Avatar Project,” Jacob says to me in a low voice. “But I haven’t met him yet.” Then he catches my tortured expression. “Bells, don’t worry. I haven’t caught any scent of vampire here. It’s a coinci… oh, ****. Never mind, now I do smell vampire. I’m sorry, Bella.”
8. Halo: Now With 100% More Anthropomorphic Hedgehog Murder
Sonic the Hedgehog games seem pretty straightforward, but there’s something about the franchise that’s attracted a legion of disturbingly obsessive fans. This story about Sonic characters in the Halo world is just a brief glimpse into Sonic fandom; much stranger tales exist, but to go any deeper would be to invite madness.
The Halo universe is being threatened by an ancient evil, and Sonic and his superfluous friends are just kind of hanging out in it. You’d think that a bunch of anthropomorphized animals would be useless in a place populated entirely by deadly soldiers, and, well, you’d be right. Sonic and company spend most of their time getting in the way, which makes their pointless presence even more mystifying. Also, Amy Rose (a 12 year old girl hedgehog) is violently murdered by a space marine in one of the more disturbing scenes we’ve ever read.
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“Amy attempted to punch and kick sloppily at the soldier, while 018 pointed his sword to the right. He then kicked Amy in the chest, throwing her into one of the walls that held a stone statue that had a fragile build to it, destroying it completely in the procedure. 018 noticed Amy’s dress was becoming wet from the inside, and 018 realized that he might have snapped something from within her infant feeding areas.”
7. NCIS: Rapture
In this very special NCIS story, the team seriously oversteps their authority when they decide to investigate the secret underwater city of Rapture from the BioShock video games. If you’re not familiar with the games, all you need to know is that they involve crazy people with superhuman powers in a city with a crime rate even worse than Detroit’s. If you’re not familiar with NCIS, all you need to know is that it’s CSI on boats.
The story begins with one of the NCIS members playing BioShock, but in a plot twist that will blow your mind the team learns that the video game is based on reality. Why a secret city would create a video game that would do nothing except incriminate everybody who lived there isn’t explained, but most video games are full of plot holes so we guess we can let it slide.
After that startling revelation, the team says “Hey, we should blow up this city for some reason,” and then they go down there and shoot everybody. In just 14,000 words the team racks up a bigger body count than every episode of the show combined has seen; but it’s all for a good cause because they… uh… actually, they just kill a lot of insane people who were minding their own business. And that’s a shame, because their lack of motivation is the only flaw in this otherwise airtight premise.
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“Remember, there are no humans here” whispered Vance. The rest nodded, and they quietly crept up behind the splicer before bludgeoning her to death.”
6. Harry Potter and The Pirates of the Caribbean
There’s a surprising amount of fan fiction involving Harry Potter and the Pirates movies, although the vast majority of stories are simply about Jack Sparrow boning one or more Hogwarts students (usually the male ones). This particular story takes a bold step forward by adding something that vaguely resembles a plot, which explores the question that mankind has asked for generations: what would happen if the Harry Potter heroes went back in time and sailed with the Pirates characters? Of course, there’s still lots of boning, but it’s (relatively) tasteful.
OK, so the plot is mostly an excuse for Harry and his pals to fall in love with Sparrow and company. Which, given their ages differences, is rather disturbing. There is some action, but even during the fight scenes our heroes mostly stand in the background and daydream about each other. Furthermore, everybody’s personalities have been set to “giggling buffoon” mode, which makes the romances so sugary that they become rather nauseating; it’s like watching Care Bears make out. Oh, and Ron gets murdered because there was an uneven number of protagonists. Love can be cruel sometimes.
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“Do you, Hermione Granger, take Jack Sparrow to be your loftly wedded husband? Till death due you part?” the priest turned and asked her.
“I do” she responded. She looked back at Jack. Their eyes exchanged looks of love.
5. James Bond Takes Down SPECTRE with the Help of Pinocchio
When the new leader of SPECTRE threatens to turn every child in Europe into a donkey, it’s up to James Bond to stop his nefarious plan. But he can’t do it alone, which is why MI6 must call upon the aid of a time traveling Pinocchio, Jiminy Cricket, Lampwick and Geppetto. Why they’re traveling through time to fight evil isn’t made clear, but since any attempt at an explanation would probably make our heads explode we’re not going to complain.
Rather than turn Pinocchio and company into stone cold killing machines, the author instead chose to bring James Bond down to a G rating. While this does keep things family friendly (and this story will no doubt become a timeless family classic one day), it unfortunately eliminates the Bond franchise’s signature wit. So, to our great disappointment, Pinocchio doesn’t lie in order to spear a bad guy with his nose while saying something like “I hope you don’t mind me nosing around.” Although Geppetto does blow up two motorcycles, so that’s something.
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“James Bond’s view of M’s three guests changed when he saw not a microphone under the hat but a rather large clothed anthropomorphic cricket. James was a logical man like all 00 agents had to be but the only logical conclusion to seeing the cricket was were real life characters from the aftermath of the story of Pinocchio when the puppet was made a real boy. James Bond was not only in the presence of time travelers, but time travelers from an earth time line where the story of Pinocchio was true and not a fairy tale.”
4. Lord of the Scooby Snacks
While The Lord of the Rings is undeniably a masterpiece, we can all agree that it would have been even better had it also included a talking dog that solved mysteries. One fan fiction author, seeing the error of J.R.R. Tolkien’s ways, wrote a story that dropped the cast of Scooby Doo straight into Middle Earth.
The tale begins with Scooby and the rest of the gang finding the one ring, which transports them to the Shire and turns them into hobbits. They promptly team up with Frodo and company to destroy the ring; the story is basically the same as the source material, except most of the rich mythology has been replaced with a love triangle featuring Fred, Daphne and Legolas. Oh, and Scooby falls in love with an elf dog.
Sadly, this epic wasn’t finished, so we’ll never know how it ends. However, we’re willing to bet that the plan was for Sauron to be defeated by an elaborate Rube Goldberg machine, at which point he was unmasked and revealed to be mean old Lobelia Baggins.
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“Fred glares at Legolas. “Oh man! Why on Middle Earth did have to get stuck with this guy?”Fred thinks. “And I wish I knew why Daphne likes him so much.” Fred looks a Legolas’s long hair and his tall figure. “So he’s handsome, I still don’t see what’s so great about him.” The young Hobbit thinks. “I hope we reach the town soon.” Just then Fred hears a noise that sound a bit like Orks.”
3. Sherlock Holmes and Watson Make Out, Also Have Pokemon
People have been writing Sherlock Holmes fan fiction since the character’s debut, but this story is unique in that it also involves Pokémon, and it involves them for a reason that not even the great detective could figure out.
The tale begins with Holmes trying to seduce Watson, but Watson is so distressed by this that he packs up his Pokémon and leaves for another city to become a Pokémon doctor. Holmes, unable to resist his true love, tracks Watson down, shows him his newly acquired Pokémon. At first Watson resists, but then their two Pokémon merge into one, and Watson is so impressed by the act that he gives into his feelings for Holmes. They share a passionate kiss, and while much is left unanswered we’re just thankful that the story ended before they showed each other their second kind of pocket monster, if you know what we mean.
2. The Lion King is Retold with the cast of The Golden Girls and Courage the Cowardly Dog
In the most surreal crossover known to man, Dorothy, Rose, Blanche and Sophia wake up one day to find that they’ve become lion cubs fathered by Mufasa. Courage is there for some reason too, and together they grow up with Simba, destined to do great things.
Only two chapters were written before the author abandoned the story, presumably because they recognized their own insanity and checked themselves in to a mental institution. If you’re wondering why we’re including a story that only lasted two chapters, it’s because those two chapters pack in more craziness than most complete works. For example: at the end of chapter two, Dorothy develops telekinetic powers and uses them to make a buffalo explode. And, if you listen carefully as you read about it, you can hear your mind snap.
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“But then one of the buffalo charged right at us and then before I knew Dorothy activated a pink, transparent, glossy telekinetic bubble and barricaded the both of us from that buffalo. The buffalo smashed right into the bubble and was instantly electrocuted and stunned into a paralyzing daze. He then swooned to the ground and the rest of the herd lunged right for us. ‘Fire away, Pussycat!’ I commanded Dorothy challengingly and then Dorothy shot and discharged streaks of pink lightning bolts from the telekinetic bubble in a flare of fury and then several of the buffalo were stunned and electrocuted as the electricity spewed out through their bodies and were flattened to the ground.”
1. Twilight and Harry Potter – Horrifying Pregnancies
Yeah, we know what you’re thinking. “After all the weird stuff they’ve shown me, they’re going to end with a run-of-the-mill Twilight/Harry Potter crossover? How lame is that?” Well, we’ll explain. Jeez, show some patience. Jerk.
For starters, this work in progress has already reached 319,000 words, which makes it longer than any of the novels it’s based on. Even more worrying, it comes with a disclaimer: “Will have mpregs!” For our laymen readers, that means male pregnancies. That also means it’s OK for you to stop reading and slowly back away from your computer; we won’t judge you.
We’ll admit that we didn’t read the entire thing because, well, it’s a 319,000 word story about male Harry Potter and Twilight characters getting knocked up. But from what we skimmed before our eyes started to bleed we deduced that this epic tale is about Harry and Draco moving to Forks for some reason, where they promptly shack up with Edward and Jacob, respectively. There’s really no plot beyond that; it’s just hundreds of thousands of words of flirting, moping and making out.
There are about 20 scenes of Harry Potter getting in and out of the shower, and everybody spends most of their time telling each other how nice they look without shirts on. Oh, Draco ends up pregnant. There’s even a long explanation as to how this is possible, although thankfully the details of how the child will be delivered are left out. But don’t worry; we’re sure some other fan fiction writer will cover that soon enough.
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“No,” Draco snapped. “No you don’t! My father can barely stand to look at me, Jacob’s on the other side of the country and I don’t even know what I feel for this- this baby growing inside of me!”
“I thought you told your dad you didn’t want to terminate.”
“Usually…I don’t,” admitted. “But sometimes I just want it to all go away.” His lips pursed in self-disgust and anger. “And then two seconds later, I feel horrible. I feel horrible that I don’t want this kid whole-heartedly and without hesitation. And just seeing Jacob…just having him think it’s so easy…I…” Draco shook his head, almost curling into himself as his arms wrapped around his middle.”
By Mark Hill
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Fanfiction is a great tool for writers. Primarily to deal with fine tuning grammar, dialogue, setting, and characterization while not needing to worry about inventing something entirely new and having people destroy you. Really it’s a plot exercise, or just for fun!
Then there’s this. I swear, I’ve written crack, I don’t think I could get this close. Has anybody read the Hogwarts Castle/Giant Squid thing? A friend of mine thought it would be fun to send that to me, and I was so horrified I couldn’t stop reading. Laughed so hard I almost died. And of course, My Immortal. Which is a great drinking game for the suicidal. Seriously. Whether you love writing it, or reading it, fanfiction is a great place to go to find the darkness of humanity. Primarily the Harry Potter fandom. I mean, Twilight in and of itself was a joke, so we can’t blame the authors in that poor fandom.
Cracked.com also has a wonderful anthology, primarily of sex scenes that should never have been written. f you want to kill an hour laughing until you choke, check it out.
This has been a message from someone who actually likes fanfiction. Also, someone actually getting a degree in writing, who can verify trying to layout plots, dialogue, setting, etc, without needing to do it from scratch will help you in actual writing exercises for class, or your own work.
Wow….I thought my fanfiction crossovers were uniquely wrong. That’s coming from a person who tried to write The Penguins of Madagascar reenacting Star Trek.
YES!! I’M NOT ALONE!
I’m going to read these now.
Max Wolf Revolutions is weirder, more messed up, and also funnier to read than all the fics you mention in this article:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9749026/1/MAX-WOLF-REVOLUTIONS
Hermione and Legolas – Fanfiction – Forgetting This: http://play.kendincos.com/166562/Wptlpfjnrnrtxfjvz-hermione-and-legolas-fanfiction-forgetting-this.html
Seriously loved your list! I must say, whoever wrote these stories must’ve been crazy… crazy creative! Talk about out of the box. Anyway, thanks for the list, probably made my own top ten lists of top ten lists.
“Fanfiction” – Awesome tool for Reading Stories on iOS
Fanfiction is a diversified app covered with thousands of different stories in many different languages. Through this you can read the subject of your own interest.
iTunes Link:
http://itunes.apple.com/au/app/fanfiction/id457484628?mt=8c
The tragically terrible yet heartwrenchingly hilarious Harry Potter fanfic “My Immortal”, anyone?
haha, true. that has to be the worst one out there! so funny XD
OMG!!!
First I loved the list.
Second, I also love fanfiction.
Third… (and by far the most terrifying) I checked all the links above and even though some are no longer available the HP/Twilight crossover w/ mpreg that is in number one… well, I read your summary of it, then laughed and mocked and thought like everyone else:” who the hell writes this stuff?? they’ve got to be crazy…” then when I was checking the link I noticed I kindda knew the author’s image, go check the author’s profile and stories and imagine my surprise when, yes, you guessed it I’ve read one of their HP fics (not the hp/twilight crossover abortion on top, a different one, only hp fic), it’s quite good actually… I feel so ashamed…
If anyone thinks these are bizarre and disturbing, you should see some of the odd stuff I’ve found as a part time fanfiction writer and a full time fanfiction reader. Personally, I try to keep my stories from bordering on the bizarre (although, I have tried crossing over Sonic and Kirby as well as Kirby and Dragonball Z), but there are some fanfiction authors out there that are insane.
Especially the one Super Smash Brothers Brawl story I read where it described, in horrifically agonizing detail, Pikachu getting skinned alive.
Oh, how I laughed…
A decent list to say the least, but i think this should of been your #1
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2554200/1/bHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH_b
Wow, just wow. I read two chapters an it was enough. My mind will be disturbed forever.
WOAH!!! wth! lol..thats too much. Ppl have some weird minds. Well that waht u call ‘creativity’ lol
I was just about to comment the same thing.
very interesting article, i like to read such a good stuff,
i wanted to write my own blog but i don’t have much time
regards from Bhp
Such a great list!!!
i practically laughed my way to the end.
where do you get all this material!?!? you must have done alot of research and errrr ALOT of reading…
i hope it was as fun for you to read all those as for us to read this :).
I love fanfiction, but even I think these were too much. Maybe, just MAYBE if they were well-written to begin with instead of just putting together all your fantasies and type them out as fast as you can without looking back, who knows…
Oh dear god no!
hahahahahaha great disturbing list!! laughed so hard